Tuesday, August 31, 2010

Criticisms coming from the Panel :)

The Panelists were Sir Nelson, Sir Ferds, Sir Hardy, Sir Chino and Sir Noynoy

-Mas maganda kung Happy Ending. Hindi Sad Ending.
>It's better kung sa dream, ok lang na wala siya nakuha na ice cream. Pero sa ending dapat meron.
-Like what Ms. Lorna said, Madaming TOP VIEW.
.Ayusin! Dapat maayos yung angles.
-Suggestion ni Sir Hardy
>dapat may continuity kasi. For example, yung pagsilip ni Nina dun sa window. Something about Perspective.
-Suggestion ni Ms. Lorna
-Bakit daw TOP VIEW mostly? Dapat maayos mag establish ng shot. Kung ano ba dapat yung gusto mo iemphasize. Sabi nga daw ni Brad Bird, importante yung perspective.
-Suggestion ni Sir Nelson
>Dapat texturized yung floor. Using Fine Lines.
(Actually, gagawin ko na nga talaga suggestion ni Sir. )
>Papaturo ako kay Sir Chino. (Eh siya nagsabi eh..he offered me that he will teach me how)
-Dapat kukunin yung Ice Cream sa Freezer. Hindi sa baba.
> Siguro pag kuha niya ng icre cream using a stool.
-Sir Hardy said something about my floor.
> Hindi daw parang pantay.
>Tapos sabi ni Ms. Lorna, ayun nga kaya siguro nasabi yun dahil hindi established ang shot. Tapos naka top view pa.
- Yung main character hindi daw fine yung lines. Unlike nung sa Incidental character na fine yung lines.
-Ok naman daw yung style ko.
-THEY AGREED THAT I WILL USE "ANIMATION FLASH" (ok gagamit na ako ng flash ;) )
-buhok ng character ko, panot daw.
> I NEED TO FIX THIS.
-character construction, iba yung buhok dun sa nakikita sa ibang shots.
> Well, sabi ni Ms. Lorna, ok naman yung character ko talga, except the hair.
-Sabi ni Sir Chino
>Mapuno daw sa Vigan, so dapat yung background ko may trees.
> Wala daw kasi na puno yung background.
-Dapat para malaman na na-shock nga at panaginip yun
>It's better na yung pagkagising. biglang WAAAA.

**Over-all, everything is ok sabi nila :)

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